Many offices authorities impose a restriction on smoking within the office premises. Some governments have even banned smoking in all public places. This is a good idea but it takes away some of our freedom. Do you agree or disagree that this is the right of course. Give reason for your opinion.

I agree on that, so several offices command imposes a banner on smoking under the office premises. While many

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government

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governments

have even restricted smoking in all common places. So, smoking is a bad habit and

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is very bad of his body. Which people are

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addicted

often

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as people will be

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a heart attack

. So,

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Government

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the Government

should be banned smoking.

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of all, the smoking is very dangerous for people. Often, the

smoker

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is made of cancer patient, heart patient and a kidney patient. People should be able to itself that banned smoking on his-self.

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, when if

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smoker

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a smoker

the smoker

is smoking within the office so, effect on other people. Young people, are learning a smoking from

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smoker

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the smoker

a smoker

and adult people are heart for smoking.

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lastly that

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lastly, that

people with

smoker

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. Often, smoking is dangerous for several offices. Because, that offices dangerous for accident.

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petrol

pumps,

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pumps etc. That's why

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government

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the government

should be banned smoking. So

government

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banned smoking. So, common people will be very

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benefitting

benefits

.

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am discussing

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about smoking public places. Smoking should be not allowed

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in

common places. Because, often people

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hypersensitivity reaction to a particular allergen; symptoms can vary greatly in intensity

allergy

energy

allergic

from smoking and

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is not

good habit

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a good habit

of

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smoker

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smoking

. If

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smoker

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a smoker

the smoker

is sitting between

to

being one more than one

two

other people. So, it looks he is smoking himself. But not himself Rather other people are smoking because of

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. Should be banned on the side of

government

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. Our freedom is

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not effecting

her. To conclude, smoking should be banned whether within office or public places. Because, it is

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dangerous for

dieseases

an impairment of health or a condition of abnormal functioning

disease

diseases

and

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the condition of being susceptible to harm or injury

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of

accidents in several offices. Even though it is very dangerous

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in

public places.