Some people say that Government should break down all the historic building and replace them with modern buildings. Do you agree or disagree?

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Generally speaking, it has been argued by a number of people that monumental structures be demolished to give way to the construction of new ones. In my opinion, I strongly disagree with

this

argument as I see preserving famous structures as being an evidence of our cultural heritage and

also

a means of revenue to the government. One reason why I disagree with the view of erecting new buildings in place of old ones is that ancient structures are proofs of our various cultures. They help us

rember

recall knowledge from memory; have a recollection

remember

our roots by the tales that surround their existence.

Moreover

, these tales have been passed down from one generation to

another

Suggestion

another, thus

thus

, helping to reflect, preserve and maintain our heritage.

However

, destroying these landmarks will only aid in the possibility of faded histories.

For example

, in Nigeria, the popular

badagry

slave house has been kept over the years and

this

house holds stories and myths about the slave trade which are

been

the state or fact of existing

being

told to people. Another reason for disagreeing with the view is that ancient structures can be an avenue for the government to make

additonal

further or added

additional

revenue.

This

is by making these historical sites become tourist centres which will definitely attract people from all over the world who will be more than willing to pay any fee levied to access them.

For example

, the famous Egyptian pyramid that has been in existence for centuries attracts

miilions

(in Roman numerals, M written with a macron over it) denoting a quantity consisting of 1,000,000 items or units

millions

million

of people yearly. Sales of entry tickets

from

Suggestion

for

tourist add immensely to the national income of Egypt. To sum up, the benefits of keeping old structures

such

as it addition to governmental revenue and it

being

Suggestion

an evidence for cultural existence are reasons why

refers to the speaker or writer

strongly

dis agree

be of different opinions

disagree

to their replacement with modern buildings.

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7Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
10Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

288 words

5.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.5

Complete response

7.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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invaluable assets
tangible connection
architectural heritage
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energy efficiency
adaptive reuse
historical significance
economic implications
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