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Nowadays, there are more workers working from home and more students studying from home, due to the fact that that computer technology is more and more easily accessible and cheaper. Do you think it is a positive or negative trend?

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The electronic gadgets
has made
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have made
humanlife
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human life
more easier
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easier
 by providing remarkable facilities in terms of
work
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 and education. Many employees and students make use of computers and other technologies to complete their daily
work
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.Modern technology offers a flexible way to achieve goals and it is a good option for saving money as well as time.
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First
, the introduction of digital technologies changed the
work
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 culture in both public and private sectors. Many of the companies have included the off site
work
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 option in their policies and they allow their candidates to
work
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 from monthly twice or thrice.
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, an employee is eligible to take
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 from option if he or she has an emergency at home. Some people believe that, it is more likely to misuse
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 policy by employees.
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,
this
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 trend has become very popular across the world and has widely accepted by most of the multinational organisations. By following
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 method, people can save time and money as they do not have to travel to
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an office
the office
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 Academic field is another important sector where people make maximum use of electronic devices for learning things. There are lots of websites which
offers
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offer
 free courses for students. By opting for
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an online course
online courses
, students can save money and they have access to courses anytime. To conclude, it is a good idea to make use of computers and other technologies in various fields
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 as education with proper monitoring. The modern technologies reduce human efforts and provides more flexibility.
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