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Computers are now the basis of the modern world. They should therefore be introduced into classrooms, and their programs used for direct teaching purposes. However, dependence on computers in teaching may carry a certain degree of risk to students. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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In these days, technology reaches its heights and became the significant part of the modernisation.
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 developing technology
leads
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lead
 to many great inventions, one of them is the computerised learning programmes for teaching process in the
xlassrooms
a room in a school where lessons take place
classrooms
classroom
 rather than offline teaching. Some people opine that
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 modern
techniques
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technique
 improve student knowledge in learning skills, while others argue that
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 may lead to several risks to the students.
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 essay will discuss about the both views and my opinion will be mentioned in the following paragraphs.
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, there are myriad advantages of
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 online learning and teaching.
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 and foremost, these can be easily accessible to each and every student with a suitable username and password.
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, students can learn their syllabus from either home or classroom without any interruption.
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, computers provide views of real time examples, which professionals are not able to.
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, if a student
want
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wants
 to know clear image of 3D printing, it is clearly explained by the modern softwares with clear knowledge, but
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humans
a human
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can not illustrate
 that.
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, there are several consequences to the students because of these computers.
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 and foremost,
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students'
 eye sight may be affected by these LED and LCD displays, which have higher resolution than recommended.
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, it
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 cause brain damage to the children, due 1to the presence of more time on these coloured pictures. Another important factor is that, students are not willing to attend these classes, because there is no faculty in
classroom
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the classroom
 to control them. Having discussed arguments and counter arguments, I believe that live classes are better than offline classes, because they are able to show us things related to reality
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 of writing on the blackboard. To conclude, I reiterate my statement by saying that computers bring better understanding to the students, which professors are not able to do.

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