Genetic engineering is a dangerous trend. It should be limited. To what extent do you agree?

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With the advancement in technology, scientists
explores
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explore
a new technique to resolve the various issues regarding agriculture and human biology and given the term as genetic engineering. There is an exchange between the genes of plants and most of the experiments have been done on humans too. It is being
debatable
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debated
that whether the trend should be limited or
continous
continue a certain state, condition, or activity
continues
at its pace until it has been showing some dangerous outcome. I completely agree with the view that the experiments on varying the genes should be limited. There are various biological disorders that
needs
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need
to be taken into consideration for searching the treatment.
However
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, Genetic experiments may be
the good
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the best
the better
best
better
solution to find the treatment for diseases, it might be introducing the critical variations in
te
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the
human body that will
result
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in serious illness.
For instance
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, Physician's are trying to put barrier for the
cancerous
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cancer
gene to get transferred to children by exchanging the
genes but
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genes, but
this
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procedure would
result
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in Down's Syndrome, due to which a child become physically challenged for his whole
life
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.
Moreover
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, the agricultural specialists, deal with the seeds of the plants will
result
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in deformed plants due to their genetic experiments. To an extent, we can get
the good
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better
the best
result
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with the genetic engineering, but making changes in the natural resources will definitely come up with the
disasterous
(of events) having extremely unfortunate or dire consequences; bringing ruin
disastrous
trend
instead
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of giving disease free
life
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to the plants and to human beings. Genetic Engineering is being introduced to provide the cure to the diseases in both agricultural era and human
era
the sense organ for hearing and equilibrium
ear
, but the overuse of anything proved to be dramatic. The Genetic Experiments should be limited in terms of reducing the harmful effects to the plants and to the humans. There are various records that with the help of genetic variations, scientists would be able to find the dominant and the recessive genes and can cure the child in
mother's womb
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the mother's womb
a mother's womb
.
Furthermore
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, changing the DNA in plants, agricultural Specialists
abled
(usually followed by 'to') having the necessary means or skill or know-how or authority to do something
able
to make the plant resistant to the pests will
result
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in the disease free crop. Modern Technology explores the DNA and Genes to put the
life
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of people and plants
on
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at
with
ease, perhaps over experimentations will certainly
result
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in some harmful outcomes. To conclude, dealing with genes is something that we put someone's
life
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under threat by doing experiments on those species. In most of the countries, Scientists would come up with
the good
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the best
better
results by finding the treatment of various disorders.
Although
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, we
already came
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had already come
up with some good outcome, it
also
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introduces the terrible conditions for the humans and the plants too. Genetic Engineering should be limited to make our lives less traumatic.
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