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Some people believe teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit the teenagers and the community as well. Do you agree or disagree with this point of view? Share personal examples if applicable.

#people #teenagers #community #work #time #benefit #point
Nowadays; kids
are indulge
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are indulging
are indulged
 with
variety
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a variety
 of bad habits and they spent their enormous
time
 on social media inside of doing something which later benefits them in
positive manner
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a positive manner
. I completely agree with
this
 statement because they can grab new things which will considerably
benefits
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benefit
 in
development
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the development
 of their career.
Firstly
; adolescent period holds intensively high important in each one of life. Kids’ should
done
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do
 some unpaid community
work
 despite of wasting their
time
 on playing
videogames
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video games
 all day long and
such
. Community
work
 will defiantly
helps
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help
 them to know themselves and educate interpersonal skills alongside with communication and personality.
However
; teacher and parents should understand them value of community
work
 and its side effect on developing their life and their future enhancement.
Secondly
; community
work
give
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gives
 them chance to utilize their free
time
 and provide
opportunity
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an opportunity
opportunities
 to learn new things. I
also
 have
contribute
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contributed
 my leisure
time
 utilizing with helping poor people, have done some volunteer
work
 which
positively impact
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positively impacts
 on my personality and inspire me to help more and more people when they are in need.
Moreover
; I
also
 have done seminars free of cost to help newly graduate students and help them to motivate and choose
right field
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the right field
 for their academics. To recapitulate; kids are like blink book; whether we
are write
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are writing
write
 good or bad,
their
in or at that place
there
 will build their career
accordable
 things which contently motivate themselves to be.
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