Some people consider corruption to be the root cause of problems in government organizations and politics. What problems arise due to this corruption? What are possible solutions to eradicate corruption?

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Corruption

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root cause

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the root cause

a root cause

for all the problems irrespective of field or area. It is a universal

problem

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and not specific to any place or country. Few individuals believe,

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bribe

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a bribe

main reason

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the main reason

governments

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government

institutions and at

law makers place

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the law makers place

lawmakers place

a law makers place

Firstly

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, will discuss what are the difficulties we are facing due to

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problem

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, will suggest

few solutions

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a few solutions

this

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problem

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and followed by a conclusion. On one hand, communities facing lots of challenges for development,

main challenge

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the main challenge

corruption

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. While working, if

government

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employees habituated to

work

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with

bribe

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they will not

work

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. All are not able to provide money due to that there will be

delay

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a delay

works

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the works

. Similar way politicians, expecting

bribe

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from contractors. So that, contractors helpless to produce

quality

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the quality

work

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. Ultimately, society facing consequence with the unprofessional

work

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recent survey

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a recent survey

recent surveys

conducted in India sixty percent of

government

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work

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delaying because of

corruption

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, every

problem

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has a solution. In similar way we can eliminate

corruption

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Firstly

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government

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the government

should provide proper wages to employees and politicians. Make them

work

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happily and should not get a

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thought to do fraud.

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, after providing good facilities still few of them corrupted apply strong punishments, which are fear full

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others. Working on a solution is a two way approach, we should have support from

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government

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the government

as well as from individuals for better development.

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, in 2017, Toronto – the Human development organisation announced 60%

corruption

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controlled due to 30% hike in

government

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employees

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employee

salaries. In conclusion, due to

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corruption

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corrupt

politicians or employees having short term profits and society losing long term developments. To reduce

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problem

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people and

government

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together should

work

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don’t encourage

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not to encourage

bribe

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in any format. If we follow strict

rules

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rule

corruption

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will automatically controlled.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

rule of law
inefficient resource allocation
economic development
cynicism
distrust
governmental institutions
distorts market mechanisms
foreign investments
legislative frameworks
transparent laws
monitoring and enforcement mechanisms
anti-corruption bodies
culture of integrity
ethical behavior
public campaigns
accessibility
protection
whistleblowers
retaliation

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Some people consider corruption to be the root cause of problems in government organizations and politics. What problems arise due to this corruption? What are possible solutions to eradicate corruption?

Fully explain your ideas

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You have lost your student identification card. This has created some problems for you. Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letter advise them of your situation explain how this is affecting you request a new card

More and more people nowadays are learning on the Internet of going to class. What are the advantages of learning online? Do you think online learning can totally replace the classroom learning?