.The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000, there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on the British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use.

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IN THE PRESENT SCENERIO, MORE CARS ARE BEING MANUFACTURED THAN PREVIOUS TIME WHCIH IS CONTRIBUTING MORE TO THE ENVIRONMENTAL PROBLEMS.
THUS
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SOME OTHER WAY OF TRAVELING SHOULD BE INSPIRED AND
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FOREIGN ACTS SHOULD BE PRESENTED TO RESTRAIN THE CARE BUYING AND USAGE. I TOTALLY AGREE WITH THE ABOVE NOTION AS IT IS HELPFUL FOR THE BOTH ENVIRONMENT AND HUMAN.
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ESSAY WILL DISCUSSED WHY AND WHAT ARE THE BENEFITS OF OTHER FORM OF COMMUTING AND CONTROL
CAR
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OWNERSHIP AND IT'S
USE
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. TO START WITH WHY I CONCURE
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NEW IDEA?
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, MORE VEHICLES ON THE ROAD ARE CAUSING ENVIRONMENTAL POLLITIONS LIKE AIR AND NOISE. TO ILLUSTARTE
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, RUNNING
CAR
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BURNS A FOSSILE FUELS AND THE EXAUST COMES FROM
THAT IS
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HAZARDOUS TO THE ENVIRONMNT. FOR AN EXAMPLE FUMES COME FROM THE
CAR
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ARE CONTAINED DULFER DIOXIDE AND CARBON DIOXIDE WHICH ARE DAMAGING THE OZONE LAYER. AS ARESULT ENHANCING THE GLOBAL WARMING EFFECTS.
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,
GOVERNMENT
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IS FACING ECONOMY PROBLEM WITH LESSER USAGE OF THE PUBLIC TRANSPORT. TO ELABORATE IF NOWADAYS ALL MOST EVERYONE HAS THEIR OWN
CAR
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. BECAUSE OF
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VERY FEW PEOPLE ARE USING COMMON TRANSPORT FOR COMMUTING. FOR AN EXAMPLE, ONE OF MY FRIEND HAS
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AND FUEL PRICE ARE
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HIGH STILL SHE PREFER TO
USE
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HER
CAR
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FOR GOING SOMWHERE RATHER THAN UNSING
GOVERNMENT
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BUSES. SO WHEN LESS PUBLIC USES THE
GOVERNMENT
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BUS, LESSER THE REVENUEAND
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WASTING OF FOSSILE FUEL. IN THE CONTRAST, IF THERE BENEFITS OF USING OTHER FORMS OF COMMUTING SYSTEMS LIKE
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POOLING, RIDE SHARE, OR INTRODUCING ENVIRONMENTAL FRIENDLY FLUEL WHICH MINIMIZE THE POLLUTION TO SOME EXTENT OR AT 0 LEVEL. THE PRIME BENEFIT IS THAT PEOPLE CAN SAVE THE PLANATE BYE USING ALTERNATE WAYS
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TO EXPLAIN IT, IF INDIVIDUAL
USE
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A
CAR
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POOL OR RIDE SHARE THEY DON NOT HAVE TO PAY ALL THE EXPENCES LIKE FUEL PRICE AND
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ONE
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WILL BE USED FOR UP 5 PEOPLE
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OF 5
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SEPARATE
CARS.
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THERE WILL BE LESS DANGEROUS GAES IN THE AIR AND DECREASES THE POLLUTION
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WHICH LEAD TO LESS ENVIRONMENTAL DAMAGE. NUMBER OF PEOPLE INCREASEING DAY BY DAY IN
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BUYING LIST
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IS DUE TO CHEAP
CAR
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PRICES AND FUELS. ONE SOLUTION FOR THE INCREASED
CAR
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OWNERSHIP IS
GOVERNMENT
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SHOULD INCRESES THE
CAR
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COST AND ESTRICT THE NUMBER OF REGISTRATION PER PERSON OR PER FAMILY. I AM SURE
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WILL DEFINATLY HEPL PEOPLE TO
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ANOTHER WAY OF TRVELING. TO SUM UP, BY PRESENTING OVERSEAS CONSTITUTIONS WILL RESTRICT THE
CAR
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OWNERSHIP AND
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HELPFULL TO THE ENVIRONMET
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • reliance on
  • regulate
  • traffic congestion
  • pollution
  • public health
  • sustainable development
  • alternative forms of transport
  • car ownership
  • balancing benefits and drawbacks
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