It is more important for schoolchildren to learn about local history than world history. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

History

is an important subject at school. Some people

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prompt

the

ideal

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idea

that local

history

plays more important role

compare

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comparable

to the world

history

. In my opinion, I

am partially disagree

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partially disagree

am partially disagreeing

have partially disagreed

with

this

. National

history

benefits

schoolchildren

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school children

in various ways. The countries’

history

tell

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tells

the kids about its origin, explain how people lived in the past, what people have done in certain historical events. All of the local historic facts contribute to the national culture. Learning the

history

of the kids’

country not

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country, not

only acknowledges them about the

events but

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events, but

also

explains to them some of cultural

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an inherited pattern of thought or action

traditions

tradition

.

For example

, the

occurance

an event that happens

occurrence

of

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In addition

, the pass

history

will enhance the national pride

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of

the children, which keep the

chidren

a young person of either sex

children

love their country more. From historical events, children learn about the

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an inherited pattern of thought or action

tradition

traditions

traditional

and dignity of their ancestor, and continue keeping as

wellas

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well as

developing them.

Vietnamese traddition

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The Vietnamese tradition

Vietnamese tradition

Vietnamese traditions

of tacking foreign enemies has been

preserving

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preserved

throught

all the way through

throughout

through

out the period of building and protecting the countries, and nowadays,

the young

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the younger

generation

are taught

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is taught

and keep the pride of the

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consisting of or derived from tradition

traditional

tradition

. Worldwide

history

,

on the other hand

,

can not

can not

cannot

be underestimated. Learning what happened around the world helps us explain some event, as a

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result

, the interaction between countries and inside the nation itself.

For instance

, the global colonisation happened due to the economical crisis is among the Western countries.

Futhermore

in addition

Furthermore

, studying about the past broaden our

mind

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minds

in understanding other countries past, which strengthen solidarity amongst the nations. In conclusion, the local

history

is essential for every

children

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child

in a country, but

can not

can not

cannot

deny the importance the world

history

in children’s education.