A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

Instead
of considering the very old ethics of life,
such
as honour, kindness and trust as the real worth of a human, a school of thought, claims people's social dignity and materialistic things as worth.
This
essay completely disagrees with the
fact
because, real respect and honour comes from good deeds rather, from all the glitters that a man earns during his whole life and the materialistic things are just temporary but a man's kindness and greatness are always remembered. Since, the ages, a large part of the civilization always keeps themselves busy in earning things which they think that will earn a value for them in the eyes of society. Despite of knowing the
fact
that
this
is a kind of illusion because they are not going to stay for ever and will be lost in the storm of time. History has witnessed many similar instances,
such
as- The father of India-Mr. M.K Gandhi. Despite of hailing from a rich family, he decided to serve for the humanity and for his nation. It was because of his efforts and ideas only that led India towards her freedom from British rule and
that is
why he is remembered till today. Now,
one
fact
that can never be neglected that it's the tendency of humans to opt that road only which serves his motives or eases him and his belongings lives all together. It is normally very difficult for a person to focus himself towards the social causes and issues. No
one
wants to emphasize
such
issues, but there are few who are completely different from others. It's not because they do not have anything to do or they intentionally do that. It's only because their intent to help others which they might carried from their ancestors.
For example
, Mr. Ratan Tata- The chairman of Tata Group.
This
organisation is
one
of the biggest and most successful organisations of the world. He runs many NGOs who are relentlessly working for the betterment of the society. Knowing the
fact
that he is
one
of the richest persons of the world, he is very down to earth and is always ready to help in any condition. In the light of the above facts, it is clear that materialistic things can earn only an illusion, but the real respect comes from the deeds, kindness, humbleness of a person.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Social status
  • Material possessions
  • Old-fashioned values
  • Honour
  • Kindness
  • Trust
  • Judged
  • Importance
  • Traditional
  • Reflection
  • Achievements
  • Hard work
  • Disregarded
  • Well-balanced
  • Meaningful
  • Cultural norms
  • Societal norms
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