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Most of the people want to achieve a balance between work and other aspects of life but only a few of them are able to do so. What are the reasons behind failure to achieve a balance in this regard and what steps can be taken to improve this situation.

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Most important thought
on
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in
 mind of every working class individual is to strike a perfect
balance
 between working and
also
 to efficiently manage other aspects of
life
 and to pursue individual interests. Even though everyone
hasgiven
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has given
 a thought about
this
 at some point of time in their carrier, only some people are able to execute actions into
plan
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the plan
a plan
.In
this
 essay I would like to explain some reasons behind failure to achieve a
balance
 in field service
industry
 catering to fields of IT and software clients and
also
 discuss about steps that can be taken to improve
this
 situation With ever expanding globalisation and advancement in
technologies there
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technologies, there
 are huge opportunities that are created in fields related to service
industry
 catering to
needs
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the needs
 of software and IT clients. Many young people are choosing to start their carrier in
above fields
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the above fields
 as companies offer higher compensation along with best in class benefits. One aspect of
this
industry
 requires employees to be flexible for instances to be able to
work
in
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on
 shift basis,
overtime
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over time
,
rotation
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rotating
 basis as
bussiness
a commercial or industrial enterprise and the people who constitute it
business
businesses
 is mostly driven by
client
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the client
.
This
 type of
work
 environment would negatively impact the idea of striking a
work
life
balance
 and is one of the reasons for failure to pursue other aspects of
life
.
On the other
hand lack
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hand, lack
 of personal motivation and getting too immersed in
work
 is
also
 one of the biggest contributors for failure to
maiantain
keep in a certain state, position, or activity; e.g., "keep clean"
maintain
balance
 across various other fields of
work
. Some of the steps that can be taken to
limits
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limit
 the negative effects of service
industry
 employees is to develop a strategy where every individual is limited
to
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to, work
work
 not more than 9 hours a day and create
innovational
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innovation
innovations
 programs for instances like providing them with coupons to stay active through gyms
,
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,
training
centers
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centres
 etc., which encourages them to pursue other aspects of
life
. For people who lack personal motivation and too immersed in
work
 training workshops should be conducted signifying the importance of striking a
balance
 and helping them to pursue their individual interests. In summary, I would like to pen down that it is very important for people to recognize the importance of striking a
balance
 between
work
 and other aspects of
life
.It is
also
responsibility
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the responsibility
 of employers to create programs that would encourage an active
life style
a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyle
.
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