most people decided to have children in their later age than in the past. why? do the advantages of this outweigh its disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples,e.g from your knowledge or experience

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In recent times a greater percentage of individuals conclude to bear offspring at a later
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as against the days of old. Bearing neonate at maturity offers the opportunity to build a career and
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save up financially for the well-being of
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babe
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to a later decision which can predispose reproductive women to various diseases
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as fibroid and infertility.
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, elderly parents are too busy, lacking
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and energy to cater for children. In my opinion, the resolution to bear children should occur at an earlier , the adva
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age of taking a stand to have a family at a later
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rose in position. An advantage of financial security results in meeting the child's needs and demand following years of saving. Parent's who take a stand to reproduce later in life may be at a disadvantaged point as various illnesses tend to crop up in the elderly, one of
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include fibroid which may hinder conception. An ncrease in
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associated with decreased fertility rate of a woman and bearing children later comes with a clause as one may not be able to reproduce at all. Lack of
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and energy in raising a child is
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associated with a late decision to conceive as children are not well trained and disciplined,
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y children and not disciplined. In conclusion the advantage of taking a stand to bear children at a later stage in life outweighs the disadvantages.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • societal norms
  • priorities
  • career
  • financial stability
  • medical technology
  • life expectancy
  • emotional readiness
  • psychological readiness
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
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