Nowadays, many people buy household goods (like television, rice cookers etc). Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Buying new materials for our homes has become the norm in many households. So many individuals these days spend their

money

in order to get more and more materialistic things

for

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in

their living places.

This

essay will discuss the impact of

this

immature selfish

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immature, selfish

behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviour

in detail. The amount of wasted

money

spent every year to own unneeded stuff is surreal. While people could use their income wisely to really benefit from it, they would unfortunately rather spend it in impractical things they might not even use in their homes, nor any other place, which surely becomes a financial issue in the long run.

For example

, recent studies

has shown

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have shown

that people’s ability of controlling their own

money logically

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money, logically

had decreased in the

last

ten years. Is short, people should really consider educating themselves to be good users of

money

instead

of obsessively buying unnecessary goods. People could easily get distracted from developing their beneficial skills/habits partly attributed to being too busy buying new things for their homes. Having no time-management skills could be a reason why people

tend buy

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tend to buy

more and more things without valuing their time. If people take time to be grateful bout what they already have and use their

money

and time powers to better themselves by buy self-development books, attending classes that are

money

-saving related

instead

of the regular act of going home shopping every weekend, they would definitely be better versions of themselves. Being better humans means being better consumers.

This

essay discussed the main two negative aspects of buying household things, which as mentioned are wasting more

money

, and being too busy buying that people tend to not

being

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be

able better themselves. In my pinion, people should work on themselves to break the old habits and to gain more positive ones to get rid of selfish

behaviors

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviour

.