Nowadays newspapers publish information about the private lives of individuals. Some people think the government should maintain a certain control over the information that gets published, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The information which published in newspapers has brought significant change to our lives in a recent days.

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are various different perspectives on the issue of personal privacy in society. Some

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true that government should control the media that gets published, while others think

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not.

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, I personally believe that the drawbacks of the newspaper far outweigh its benefits. There are two primary reasons for

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.

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of all, it is an undeniable fact that reading a newspaper to express resulting in

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serious societal problems

serious societal problem

. Despite the risk of corruption- a problem occasionally seen in people who are ordered to publish a spurious information to blame others, rather than loyal ones.

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, I certainly agree that info which printed in a newspaper is both beneficial and vital. Unfortunately, expectation and trust of people will decrease- it causes in later life.

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, while

informations

a message received and understood

information

is beneficial in the short terms, it's long-term effects are generally

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negative

.

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and even more importantly, though

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,

family issues

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a particularly good example

of that media could change individuals

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go away from a place

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not made or become different

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. Now,

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media

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are concentrating

on well-known people. Myriad of popular artist are suffering from issue of publishers are participating their own

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a characteristic state or mode of living

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and they complained it to the government.

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, I would

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maintain or assert

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the vital problem

has generally been a very negative development. By way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm my position that the media

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have had

negative impact

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a negative impact

on modern life,

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of its

affect

a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon

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to our environment. I believe that

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the government

will ban publishers.