Nowadays newspapers publish information about the private lives of individuals. Some people think the government should maintain a certain control over the information that gets published, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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The information which published in newspapers has brought significant change to our lives in a recent days.

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are various different perspectives on the issue of personal privacy in society. Some

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true that government should control the media that gets published, while others think

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not.

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, I personally believe that the drawbacks of the newspaper far outweigh its benefits. There are two primary reasons for

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of all, it is an undeniable fact that reading a newspaper to express resulting in

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serious societal problems

serious societal problem

. Despite the risk of corruption- a problem occasionally seen in people who are ordered to publish a spurious information to blame others, rather than loyal ones.

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, I certainly agree that info which printed in a newspaper is both beneficial and vital. Unfortunately, expectation and trust of people will decrease- it causes in later life.

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, while

informations

a message received and understood

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is beneficial in the short terms, it's long-term effects are generally

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negative

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and even more importantly, though

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a particularly good example

of that media could change individuals

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not made or become different

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media

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are concentrating

on well-known people. Myriad of popular artist are suffering from issue of publishers are participating their own

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a characteristic state or mode of living

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and they complained it to the government.

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, I would

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the vital problem

has generally been a very negative development. By way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm my position that the media

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have had

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a negative impact

on modern life,

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of its

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a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon

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to our environment. I believe that

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the government

will ban publishers.

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