Nowadays newspapers publish information about the private lives of individuals. Some people think the government should maintain a certain control over the information that gets published, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
The information which published in newspapers has brought significant change to our lives in a recent days.
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are various different perspectives on the issue of personal privacy in society. Some Suggestion
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not. However
, I personally believe that the drawbacks of the newspaper far outweigh its benefits. There are two primary reasons for this
.
First
of all, it is an undeniable fact that reading a newspaper to express resulting in serious society problem
. Despite the risk of corruption- a problem occasionally seen in people who are ordered to publish a spurious information to blame others, rather than loyal ones. Suggestion
serious societal problems
serious societal problem
Moreover
, I certainly agree that info which printed in a newspaper is both beneficial and vital. Unfortunately, expectation and trust of people will decrease- it causes in later life. In other words
, while informations
is beneficial in the short terms, it's long-term effects are generally a message received and understood
information
negatively
.
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negative
Further
and even more importantly, though,
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however
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on well-known people. Myriad of popular artist are suffering from issue of publishers are participating their own Suggestion
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has generally been a very negative development.
By way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm my position that the media Suggestion
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has had
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have had
negative impact
on modern life, Suggestion
a negative impact
thus
of its affect
to our environment. I believe that a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon
effect
government
will ban publishers.Suggestion
the government
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