Nowadays newspapers publish information about the private lives of individuals. Some people think the government should maintain a certain control over the information that gets published, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The information which published in newspapers has brought significant change to our lives in a recent days.
there
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There
are various different perspectives on the issue of personal privacy in society. Some
loud it's
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loud, it's
true that government should control the media that gets published, while others think
that is
not.
However
, I personally believe that the drawbacks of the newspaper far outweigh its benefits. There are two primary reasons for
this
.
First
of all, it is an undeniable fact that reading a newspaper to express resulting in
serious society problem
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serious societal problems
serious societal problem
. Despite the risk of corruption- a problem occasionally seen in people who are ordered to publish a spurious information to blame others, rather than loyal ones.
Moreover
, I certainly agree that info which printed in a newspaper is both beneficial and vital. Unfortunately, expectation and trust of people will decrease- it causes in later life.
In other words
, while
informations
a message received and understood
information
is beneficial in the short terms, it's long-term effects are generally
negatively
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negative
.
Further
and even more importantly, though
,
Accept space
,
family issues
is
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are
particularly good example
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a particularly good example
of that media could change individuals
live
go away from a place
leave
unchangeae
not made or become different
unchanged
. Now,
however
media
is concentrating
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are concentrating
on well-known people. Myriad of popular artist are suffering from issue of publishers are participating their own
lifes
a characteristic state or mode of living
lives
life
and they complained it to the government.
Nonetheless
, I would
content
maintain or assert
contend
that
thus
vital problem
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the vital problem
has generally been a very negative development. By way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm my position that the media
has had
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have had
negative impact
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a negative impact
on modern life,
thus
of its
affect
a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon
effect
to our environment. I believe that
government
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the government
will ban publishers.

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