Some people think that it is the responsibility of governments to take care of the environment while others believe that it is the responsibility of the citizens. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is often said that the one responsible for the conservation of the

environment

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is the

government

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,

this

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idea will not be effective without the help of the community,

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, I believe,

in

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that in

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order

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to maintain the preservation of the

environment

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, everyone should

have

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a

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contribution

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to

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mother nature. On the one hand, the

government

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plays a vital role in maintaining the biodiversity of the

environment

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. It is the authorities that should introduce

legislations

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legislation

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in

order

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to alleviate certain problems

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as air pollution and deforestation. There should be laws regarding the usage of cars and public

transportations

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transportation

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; since cars exhaust fumes that greatly

affects

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the

environment

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.

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, the

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could persuade the community through TV programs and ads regarding the conservation of the biodiversity of the

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. By having these activities, the individuals are informed of the consequences of their actions,

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they may alter their ways to avoid harming the

environment

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, it cannot be denied that

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individuals in

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society have

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a major role in preserving the

environment

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. Plastics are considered to be a major source of plastic pollution that widely affects

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wildlife and wildlife

habitat

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habitats

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By implementing

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laws regarding the usage of plastics to be decreased is a great help to the

environment

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, and

also

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by using recyclable materials.

Lessening

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the plastic wastes from entering and contaminating the waterways, people are able to conserve drinkable water and its inhabitants.

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, individuals must plant more trees to increase the oxygen rate being released

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into

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the atmosphere in

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to fight

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global warming.

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, protecting the

environment

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is a huge amount of work in

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to reach a more sensible approach. It is

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joint forces of both the

government

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and their citizens

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result in the most effective way of conserving the

environment

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