At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

At the present time, the population of some countries includes a greater

number

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of young adults compared to the

number

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of older people.

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situation has both advantages and disadvantages.

these

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These

two

category

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categories

of people play different roles in a

country

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. It is not easy to outweigh

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another. When we talk about young people, what

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comes to our mind is that

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category of people

are

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is

the

future

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of a

country

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. If a

country

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do not have

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does not have

a large

number

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of young

aadults

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an adults

a adults

,

it's

of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"

its

future

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might be at stake.

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on

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On

the other

hand when

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hand, when

the

number

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of senior

citizen

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citizens

becomes larger in

number

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comapred

examine and note the similarities or differences of

compared

to the

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of young adults, it may

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affect

one

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country

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badly.

the

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The

people who are young adults today are the people who are going to be the

future

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leaders,

doctors engineers

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doctors, engineers

and so many other

proffessionals

engaged in a profession or engaging in as a profession or means of livelihood

professionals

professions

professional

in

one

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country

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. A

country

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that has

large

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a large number

number

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of young adults than older people can keep confidence about the well

future

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of that specific

country

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if the education system is good.

Education system

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The education system

are

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is

one

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of the core things that are responsible for the situation of a nation. It is the education system that

help

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helps

todays young adults to have good and sufficient knowledge

aout

(of quantities) imprecise but fairly close to correct

about

necessary things related to individual or

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's

wellbeing

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well being

.

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,

another

not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied

other

advantagesof

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advantages of

having young adults large in

number

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is

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are

that, these people are more

energytic

possessing or exerting or displaying energy

energetic

and charismatic in comparison with the older people. Now

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

would like to discuss about the disadvantages of having less

number

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of older people and large

number

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of young people.

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firstly

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Firstly

, the knowledge level of

people

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the people

increases with age.

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for

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For

example: there are huge differences between the skills of a 50

years

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year

old

leader

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and a 35

years

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year

old

leader

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. In the United States the

leader

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is

atleast

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at least

60 years old and he is better experienced than the president of Saudi Arabia who is 35 years old. Neither

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young

leader

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has good

experience

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of how to run a

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country nor

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country, nor

he has any previous

experience

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or skills related to

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.

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, the young adults learn things from the older people.

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for

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For

example: let us talk about life

experience

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.

an

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An

older person has more life

experience

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compared to

an

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a

young person.

there

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There

are a lot of things that we learn from our parents and they are older than us.

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, young leaders can follow the footsteps of older leaders who have proper

experience

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of running a

country

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smoothly. A

country

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would face severe disaster if suddenly

an

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a

young

leader

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takes over the power without any skills or

experience

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.

another

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Another

example is the difference between senior doctors and young doctors. It is said that people learn with time and

experience

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.

undoubtedly

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Undoubtedly

an older doctor would be much more skilled than a young doctor has he has

better

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a better experience

experience

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. I think, the advantages of

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situation where the

number

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of older people

are becoming

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is becoming

less than young people does not outweigh the disadvantages.

there

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There

should be

proper ratio

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a proper ratio

of everything, be that

number

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of people in

one

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country

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.

a

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A

country

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can never go too far if it lacks the skilled and experienced older people

beacause

for the reason that; on account of

because

it is the people who will prepare the young people for

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future

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the future

.