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Many people are having difficulties to keep up with a healthy diet and an active life, which is causing a detrimental effect on their physical as well as mental health.
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 essay will discuss some of the major reasons for the dietary problem and how easily we can sort out and lead a balanced diet life regularly with some simple life changes. Many people are spending more
time
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 at work and it has been difficult for them to find
time
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 to eat. Taking meals on
time
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 is important for
stomach
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the stomach
 to digest
food
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, if you eat
lately you
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lately, you
 might have acidity problem which may cause stomach ulcer in the near future. Another reason is, people are not willing to cook their own
food
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 at home and they purchase and consume unhealthy
food
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 in order to save
time
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. Home cooked
food
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 and timely eating habits would be the best solution to avoid unhealthy lifestyle. People should start to focus and spend
time
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 on both what they shop and eat. Cooking by
own
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owner
 can
also
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 be affordable and you can save money. The other way they can stop eating high calorie foods
such
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 as sugary drinks, fried and any frozen foods. Apart from eating healthy, everyone must exercise at least 30 minutes daily for activities
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 as walking, running, etc., In conclusion, the two main difficulties to have a balanced diet
are taking
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is taking
takes
 meals lately and unwillingness to cook
food
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. But, preparing home-made
food
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 and taking
timely
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time
 meal can obviously solve the dietary problems as well as saving money.

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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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