In the past, shopping was a routine domestic task. Many people nowadays regard it as a hobby. To what extent do you think this is a positive trend? You should give reasons for your answer using your own ideas and experience.

Quite often one encounters and extensive discussion among various sections of people in the society.

buying

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Buying

something in olden days was a bit difficult task,

however

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now a days

the period of time that is happening now; any continuous stretch of time including the moment of speech

nowadays

it has become a hobby to many peoples.I concur with the statement and

simutaneously

at the same instant

simultaneously

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

will share my views on the both

side

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sides

of the statement.

Firstly

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, I would like to reiterate the

positve

characterized by or displaying affirmation or acceptance or certainty etc.

positive

aspect

on

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of

the topic

,

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,

when we look at the olden days how people

spneds

pass time in a specific way

spends

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thier

of them or themselves

their

third

time

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on

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thier

of them or themselves

their

there

three

general shopping with a less options and they keeps a record where they save

thie

definite article

the

time

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and money for how

frequent

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frequently

they need to buy

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thier

of them or themselves

their

things.

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however these

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However, these

However these

days abundance of options

are

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is

available and some of them are

fasicnating

capable of arousing and holding the attention

fascinating

to the people to spend more

time

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on shopping as they spends on

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thier

of them or themselves

their

own hobbies.

On the other

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hand i

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hand, I

hand I

would like to highlight the negative side and reiterate the contradict of the statement spending much

time

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on shopping needs a huge range of money and

its

it is

it's

not easy to every human being.

conclusion

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Conclusion

, spending a limited

time

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on the shopping was the domestic

task whrereas

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task, whereas

task whereas

it has become a hobby which will not get any advantage to the peoples.