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Many people believe that formal “pen and paper” examinations are not the best method of assessing educational achievement. Discuss this view and give your own opinion.

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Many varied forms of examination are being applied
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 as formal
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 exams, exams on a computer or oral exams.
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 some people believe that pen and
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 exams are not effective in assessing educational achievement, I personally believe that
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 type should be decided with regards to the student profile. For nearly a decade,
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 exams have been mostly replaced by computer-assisted exams or oral exams, which give
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 takers flexibility and comfort.
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, IELTS, International English Language Testing System is an internationally recognized
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 offering different types as
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 based or computer delivered which make it easier to choose the type that
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 takers are confident with. In fact, even a
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 based version of as IELTS involve two kinds of evaluation depending on printed
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 and a speaking
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 making the
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 available for people with different expression styles. It is true that every person has his/her own way of learning.
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, when it is time to prove their learnings, the style for each person could possibly vary. To me,
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-based exams are safe and mostly available for people who can express themselves in writing. A recent research conducted by the British Education Council has stated that only one fourth of
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 takers are capable of expressing themselves in a
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 based
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, one fourth of the attendants, state that they find it more comfortable to take an
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 orally. Surprisingly, the rest two forths of them maintain that they get higher scores on a computer based type. That shows the necessity of offering variations in
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 types to address more people. In conclusion, despite the fact that many
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 takers are offered only pen and
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, it is significant to consider varied styles for a variety of people.
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