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You have decided to resign from your work in order to try a new field. Write a letter of resignation to your boss. In your letter: tell your boss of your decision and explain why you are leaving explain what you have learnt from your current job and how you feel about leaving ask for a letter of reference

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Dear Sam, I am writing
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my resignation from the duties that have been working past 3 years. I have decided to do my own business in my native place since it has been my long-term goal since my childhood.
Although
, the kind of business I would like to do is, not yet decided. I have a couple of ideas in my mind and even I am not sure which one I will take up
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 that long list of thoughts. Since day one of
this
 project, I have
keen
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 to learn so my new initiatives and a plethora of skills, that will definitely
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helpful
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 going forward for my professional as well as personal life,
such
 as communication skills for the new business, customer satisfaction, team co-ordination, and team perseverance, irrespective of the nature of work we do.
In addition
 to that, I have learned ,how to behave as a quintessential
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.
However
, I am requesting you to provide me
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the
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 reference paper, probably
that
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might
immensely
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 helpful for me in near future. There would
no
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 urgency to provide that letter since I do not have
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 appointment where I
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 to submit the letter of reference. Thank You so much for being supportive and keep motivating
all
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 the time. Regards Shareef

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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