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Some believe that people who do physical work should be paid on par with the people who have high level degree. Do you agree or disagree ?

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Nowadays it is clearly evident that people categorised by who do physical
work
 and who qualified by
high
Suggestion
higher
degree
level
. It is argued that both employee should be paid equally.
in
Suggestion
In
 my
opinion both
Accept comma addition
opinion, both
person
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people
persons
 who
devided
separated into parts or pieces
divided
decided
devised
 by
degree
 and experience are doing
vital improtance job
Suggestion
vital importance jobs
vital importance job
 in own field.
However
, people who got
high
Suggestion
a high level degree
level
degree
 should be paid more because of spending time for getting
qualification
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a qualification
.
Firstly
, people who do physical
work
 should be develop own skills, improve all knowledge
fpr
appropriate to; intended for
for
 gaining
desire
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desired
 salary and
high
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higher
level
degree
.
However
,
current way
Suggestion
the current way
 is not so easy as seems to be like that, but with hard
work
 and
persistance
the property of a continuous and connected period of time
persistence
 everyone can be
chnaged
made or become different in nature or form
changed
 type of life.
Secondly
, nothing remained
on
Suggestion
in
 a place and people who have
high
Suggestion
a high level degree
level
degree
 should improve all knowledge. With the advancement of technology, there are
opprotunity
a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunities
 to improve qualification more and more. If you are getting various
degree
 you can be required high
level
 wage. As
example
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an example
, person an account and to pretend to certain salary he needs to get "1C" certificate.
Thus
, it is one of the way to consolidate own
degree
. To conclude, both employee posses similar condition to show and improve degrees. In my opinion, people who do physical
work
 should not be paid on par the people why have
high
Suggestion
a high level degree
level
degree
 because everyone can be reached high
level
degree
 if they want

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