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Art classes, such as painting and drawing, are as important for children's development as other subjects, so it should be compulsory in high school. Do you agree or disagree?

#art #classes #children #development #subjects #school
Although
 art subjects are necessary for the development of
students but
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students, but
 according to me, it should not be mandatory it should be as an optional subject. Undoubtedly, paintings and drawings assist the learners in many ways
,
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,
however other
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however, other
 main subject
such
 as science and mathematics need to take
in
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into
 account inevitably.These kinds of module is not only
intresting
arousing or holding the attention
interesting
 but
also
 having more job opportunity of well professionals job in future
.
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.
 Rather than compulsion on art subject it is imperative to emphasis on main subjects for the
wellfare
governmental provision of economic assistance to persons in need
welfare
 of students.
Moreover
, when there would be mandatory to opt all
subjects
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subjects, then
then
 it ultimately put the burden on the pupils they do not pay attention to the major task
.
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The student would surely focus on easy modules in order to achieve good marks.
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