Some people believe that women should play an equal role as men in a country’s police force or military force, such as army. While others think women are not suitable for these kinds of jobs. What is your opinion?

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as police or in the army, into the roles and the numbers same as men, has received divided opinions. While some welcome the idea others object the o

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citing a wrong notion, that women are incapable of

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jobs.

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essay will describe the reasons to support the

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equality in the forces of internal and external security forces.

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, the perception of

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bias needs to be removed from the society. Most of the developing countries already have policies for it, but there is a paucity in implementation at the grass root level.

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, rural demographics of certain areas are insular to

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reforms.

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, the practice of minor girls getting married is practiced by their parents in tribal areas of the Indian state, Chhattisgarh.

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is often done to prevent women t

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into mainstream jobs other than household chores. Necessary public awareness and strict implementation of laws against child marriages can result in b

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women

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, the c

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of women is often underestimated, even in well developed and most educated societies.

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is a serious concern which can only be addressed by supporting women to get into different roles and create an environment to grow. Even 1% of s

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the success

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initiatives can result in removal of wrong notions about women. There are many famous female achievers around the globe,

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, l

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a light weight female boxer

Mary Kom has risen from a rural background and went on to win Olympic gold, being a mother. Many

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role models exist in I

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the Indian Navy

Air force and the famous personality Kiran Bedi, a fearless police officer, which have disproven the inability of w

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, the social perception of

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bias needs to be curbed by conducting awareness camps in rural areas and many more work opportunities should be declared

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neutral, to increase the intake of the female officers in the police and military forces

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the Army