By punishing murderers with the death penalty, society is also guilty of committing murder. Therefore, life in prison is a better punishment for murderers. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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According to some people, governments that

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express strong disapproval of

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murderers with the capital punishment, commit murder as well. Even if it is an issue extremely controversial, I tend to agree with

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kind of interpretation.

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, an assassin should be punished with a life sentence

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of the

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penalty

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. Those who believe that killers should be punished with the

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, are convinced that these kind of criminals cannot change and they do not deserve to live anymore. In

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fact, for

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people

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person

, the only acceptable

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for the executer of certain crimes (like murder) should be the capital

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the act of punishing

punishment

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are only some regions in the world where the

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penalty

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is legally accepted. The majority of people believe that no one should have the power to decide whether a person should live or die, even the highest authority, in

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case the government.

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, as mentioned above, unfortunately there are still some states (

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in the western world) where

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practice is not unlawful yet. European countries were pioneers in

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context, and

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the death penalty

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to be banned since the 18th century. At that time,

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the prison

was considered to be the best way of punishing people, and

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belief is still part of the modern society. Nobody should be killed, even if he or she committed the worst crime as killing someone else. In conclusion, the society is in constantly evolving and more and more governments are taking distance from these kind of punishments. Obviously, taking life from someone has always been considered the worst crime,

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the government should not put itself on the same level of

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Life sentence

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A life sentence

is definitely a better way to punish people, even murderers.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.5

Complete response

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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283 words

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