Discipline is an ever increasing problem in modern schools. Some people think that discipline should be the responsibility of teachers, while others think that this is the role of parents. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

There is no doubt that these days lack of
discipline
is one of the major concerns in
modern school
Suggestion
modern schools
the modern school
. The question is, is it the role of teachers or parents to teach
discipline
for children? In
this
essay, I’m going to discuss the role of both teachers and parents in inculcating
discipline
in a child and try to draw a reasonable conclusion. On one hand, some people believe that
discipline
should be the responsibility of teachers. The main reason given to support
this
claim is that the students spend the majority of their time at the school dealing
with teachers more
Suggestion
with more teachers
than their parents.
However
, the main duty of teachers is to teach students variety of academic subjects. To illustrate
further
, each classroom has at least 20 students who have different
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
behaviours
, so it’s
no
negation of a word or group of words
not
applicable for teachers to observe each student’s
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
and deal with it individually.
On the other hand
, parents observe their children nearly close since their birth. They tend to spend a lot of time with their kids during their free time at home. Since they closely interact with their child, they have
opportunity
Suggestion
the opportunity
an opportunity
to instill
discipline
, morale, and values in their children, along with mend their
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
.
Furthermore
, children try to imitate their parents and learn
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
skills from them.
For example
, many kids have the same way of talking as
they
of them or themselves
their
parents.
This
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
has not taught by parents, rather it is something he learns
form
a giver or sender
from
his own observation.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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