Topic: In some areas of the US, a 'curfew' is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this?

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Teenage years are the most crucial years of human's life. These years play a very important role in either building or destroying
person
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's future. In these years parents really need to keep a watch
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on
children's activities. They should
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be vigilant of the gathering of their children.
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I agree that there should be restrictions
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on
what a teenager can and cannot do in the country, but having a
curfew
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in a place like
USA
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the USA
is not a good idea I think. US is a pretty safe country and people in US like to live an independent life. Teenage years are the building blocks of
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's life. As the
person
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is going towards
adulthood these
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adulthood, these
years are the best to explore your talent and
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to become independent. If you place a
curfew
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on
teenagers they
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teenagers, they
will never be truly free and will not be independent.
Instead
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of having a
curfew
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parents
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parent
should teach their teenage children of good and bad. They should make them responsible and should have confidence in their child.
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Moreover if
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Moreover, if
you place a
curfew
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on
teenagers they
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teenagers, they
are more likely to engage in inappropriate activities as an adult
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alcohol abuse, drug abuse etc.
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is because when you restrict a
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, curiosity tends to increase and
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curiosity can lead to dangerous outcomes when the
person
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is set free. But,
on the other
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hand there
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hand, there
should be laws to govern the activities of teenagers
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as having a minimum age to smoke or to drive and government should
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restrict teenagers to enter places
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as bars, clubs
etc
continuing in the same way
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without an adult. In a nutshell, it is inappropriate to have a
curfew
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on teenagers,
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one should set them free to explore and to become
independent but there
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independent, but there
should be laws to regulate their activities and parents and schools should make children responsible enough to abide by these rules.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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