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Is it useful to recycle glass bottles? Shoul people throw wasted bottle away? Your opinion

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The diagram depicts how
glass
 bottles are recycled Overall, there are three stages of beginning with the collection of wasted
glass
 bottles until packaging new bottles. At the
first
 stage, after picking
second
-hand
glass
 bottles, they are brought to a collection point and
then
 are send
to
Suggestion
sent
a recycling area. To clean these bottles, they are made. They are placed under high pressure water in order to eliminate dust and other substances. In the
next
 test, before being moved ti a
in the direction of
to
glass
 factory so as to be crushed in t
o sma
expresses motion to a point on, or within, something
into
ller pieces, wasted
glass
 bottles are classified by the colo
r
a visual attribute of things that results from the light they emit or transmit or reflect
colour
such
 as clear, green and brown. In term,
glas
s pieces are
Suggestion
the glass pieces
 given in furnace and are burnt in the high temp
rature at
the degree of hotness or coldness of a body or environment (corresponding to its molecular activity)
temperature
temperatures
600 degrees Celc
ius to
Swedish astronomer who devised the centigrade thermometer (1701-1744)
Celsius
800 degrees Celc
ius. At
Swedish astronomer who devised the centigrade thermometer (1701-1744)
Celsius
 the following step, the recycled
glass
 coupled with new liquid
glass
 is poured into a mould to shape into bottles .
F
in
Accept space
.
ally, these bottles are filled with drinks and are packaged. Products are transported to supe
r market to
a large self-service grocery store selling groceries and dairy products and household goods
supermarket
serve customers.

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