Some parents think it is good to give their children mobile phones, while others disagree. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

In discussing whether giving children a mobile

phones

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phone

, one should bear in mind the complexity of the issue. Some people think that allowing our children to carry a phone is good, because it allows parents to contact their children when they desire.

Others

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Others, however

however

, disagree and believe it is harmful. In my opinion,

permiting

consent to, give permission

permitting

our children to carry cellular phones

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have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)

is

bad and should be discouraged. In

this

essay, I will provide reasons and examples to support my view. One argument in favour of my position is that cellular phones may expose

chidren

a young person of either sex

children

to offensive websites, that can endanger them.

For example

, in a recent survey done among Israeli children, more than 15% reported

to see

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seeing

pornographic videos, and more than 20% reported

to see

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seeing

violent and racist videos on their phones. When asked what did they feel when watching these videos, more than 50% reported to feel afraid, confused and insecure.

This

example

demonstrate

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demonstrates

that, cellular phones expose our sons and

doughters

a female human offspring

daughters

daughter

to inadequate content

chich

interrogative pronoun, used both substantively and adjectivally, and in direct and indirect questions, to ask for, or refer to, an individual person or thing among several of a class

which

sould

expresses an emotional, practical, or other reason for doing something

should

would

be supervised. Another point supporting my opinion is that cellular phones may be highly addictive, and may affect the well being of our children.

For instance

, many kids nowadays prefer to play on their phones rather than going outside and play football.

As a result

, these children can suffer from overweight and obesity, which have severe consequences on their health.

This

example demonstrates that children can suffer from medical issues related to

in adequate

lacking the requisite qualities or resources to meet a task

inadequate

exposure to

phones

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the phones

. In conclusion, I maintain that early and unsupervised exposure to

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migratory

mobile

phones may be harmful to our children and should be discouraged. We should give our children phones once they are aware of the possible risks and when they are mature enough.