The line graph below shows the number of annual visits to Australia by overseas residents. The table below gives information on the country of origin where the visitors came from. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information given.
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The given line graph illustrates the
number
of visits to Use synonyms
Australia
by foreign Use synonyms
citizen
per year Fix the agreement mistake
citizens
while
the table specifies the visit per country that took place Linking Words
form
the Correct your spelling
from
year
1975 to 2005. There has been a Fix the agreement mistake
years
gradually
increase Change the adverb
gradual
Change preposition
in visit
visit
from 1975 to 1985 Fix the agreement mistake
visits
while
the Linking Words
number
goes doubled from 984 to 1995 as seen from the given chart. Use synonyms
However
, compared to 1975, Linking Words
in
2005 the Change preposition
apply
number
of foreign Use synonyms
visitors
has Use synonyms
increase
dramatically from 8.8 to 30.4 in 2005.
Change the verb form
increased
furthermore
, among all the given six Linking Words
countries
Japan and South Korea Use synonyms
has
the greatest Change the verb form
have
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
to Use synonyms
Australia
in 2005 compared to 1975 as mentioned in Use synonyms
table
, South Korea: Add an article
the table
2.9
Add a missing verb
was 2.9
to
1975 and 9.1 in 2005; Japan Change preposition
in
3.2
in 1975 to 12.0 in 2005. Meanwhile, Add a missing verb
was 3.2
china
is lying at the bottom with the lowest Change the capitalization
China
visitors
of Use synonyms
Use synonyms
Australia
up to just 0.3 million people which gradually increase Change preposition
in Australia
up
to 0.8 in 2005 as compared to other Change preposition
apply
countries
Use synonyms
mention
in the table.
Change the form of the verb
mentioned
overall
, compared to 1975 the Linking Words
number
of foreign Use synonyms
visitors
has been increasing, reaching a quite high Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
of 32 million to Use synonyms
Australia
Use synonyms
while
having a majority of Linking Words
visitors
from south Use synonyms
korea
and japan. Change the capitalization
Korea
In
Change preposition
On
contrary
, the least Correct article usage
the contrary
number
of Use synonyms
travelers
are from china, but it Change the spelling
travellers
safe
to say that Add a missing verb
is safe
majority
of the visit to Correct article usage
the majority
Australia
Use synonyms
were
from Asia Change the verb form
was
countries
than western Use synonyms
countries
.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, australia, visitors, countries with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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