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Some people think planning future is a waste of time and it is more important to focus on the present. Do you agree or disagree?

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It is often argued that focussing on current is important than planning for coming times.I strongly
agree
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agree with this statement
this
 statement.
First
 of all living in present-day is more valuable rather than planning for coming days.
For example
, we have to eat and buy whatever we want today itself than preparing for
future
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the future
.
Secondly
, humans think of
future
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the future
 more than
required which
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required, which
 will cause mental stress on one’s health.
For instance
, it has been reported that many individuals face mental illness because of excessive thinking about
days
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the days
 ahead. But
however
, proper funds are required in later stages for which we need to plan
in much advance
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much in advance
. To illustrate, it is
good idea
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a good idea
 to invest in retirement plans like RRSP’s for later stages of life.Proper planning of retirement life is very important for everyone to live happily. To summarize, living in current is important than thinking of future planning.

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