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It is undeniable fact that many industries tend to make advertisement to increase the sale of products
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an analytic or interpretive literary composition
essay
easy
issue
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elucudate
make clear and (more) comprehensible
elucidate
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scrutinixe
to look at critically or searchingly, or in minute detail
scrutinise
scrutinize
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r reasons
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advetisement
a public promotion of some product or service
advertisement
help to more sales of
product
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and positive view for
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development in following paragraphs To embark upon the main reason why
effective display
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the effective display
of
product
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assists to expand the sale is attraction of
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the individual
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any company
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makes
any
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they have different method to advertise their
product
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like
pamphelts
a small book usually having a paper cover
pamphlets
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banner
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online advertisement
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so that people easily attract toward the
product
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and
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obtain by purchase; acquire by means of a financial transaction
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purchased
purchases
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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