The number of people who are at risk of serious health problems due to being over weight is increasing. What is the reason for the growth in overweight people in society. How can this problem be solved.

Students need to determine the degree and certificate courses that emphasize key
data career
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data, career
related skills that are
on
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in
demand
. For
this
they need data on the job skills
demand
in Canada. So that they could use the job
demand
data to identify the courses to
enroll
register formally as a participant or member
enrol
. Since the requirement
is related
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relates
to
data career
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data, career
. We
further
clean the data to include only skills related to data career. We excluded job skills like Middleware and Integration Software
,
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,
Economics, Foreign Language Translation and others non data related skills. Storage Systems and Management
is included
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are included
since
this
skill
relates to data management. Statistical Analysis and Data Mining
skill
is ranked
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are ranked
at the top in all three years of the data that we have. Clearly
this
skill
is the most
demand
skill
. Storage Systems and Management
was ranked
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were ranked
2 ,3 and 5 in the year 2014, 2015 and 2016. Though the
demand
seems to decrease with the 3 year data it is still
on
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in
demand
currently. Data Engineering and Data Warehousing
is
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are
the
next
on
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to
demand
skill
as it listed in 2015 and 2016 with increasing
demand
.

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