The number of people who are at risk of serious health problems due to being over weight is increasing. What is the reason for the growth in overweight people in society. How can this problem be solved.

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Students need to determine the degree and certificate courses that emphasize key

data career

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data, career

related skills that are

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demand

. For

this

they need data on the job skills

demand

in Canada. So that they could use the job

demand

data to identify the courses to

enroll

enrol

. Since the requirement

is related

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relates

data career

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data, career

. We

further

clean the data to include only skills related to data career. We excluded job skills like Middleware and Integration Software

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Economics, Foreign Language Translation and others non data related skills. Storage Systems and Management

is included

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are included

since

this

skill

relates to data management. Statistical Analysis and Data Mining

skill

is ranked

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are ranked

at the top in all three years of the data that we have. Clearly

this

skill

is the most

demand

skill

. Storage Systems and Management

was ranked

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were ranked

2 ,3 and 5 in the year 2014, 2015 and 2016. Though the

demand

seems to decrease with the 3 year data it is still

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demand

currently. Data Engineering and Data Warehousing

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are

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demand

skill

as it listed in 2015 and 2016 with increasing

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.5

Complete response

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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