In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, people are eating
food
outsite
beyond the boundary of; external to
outside
everyday due to
bussy
actively or fully engaged or occupied
busy
life. Many individuals around the world eat large amount of fast
food
and
lot
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a lot
lots
of them
are suffering
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is suffering
from
health
issues. But,
authorities
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Authorities
are trying to increase
tax
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taxes
on it. I
stongly
with strength or in a strong manner
strongly
agree that
governement
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
governments
should charge more tax on these kind of foods.
Moveover
Suggestion
Move over
, people have less time to make
food
at home, so they prefer to eat from
outisde
beyond the boundary of; external to
outside
.
Firstly
, fast
food
taste
Suggestion
tastes
keep them calling so they go again and again, but due to visiting regularly
this
will have
big problem
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big problems
a big problem
in individual's
health
.
For example
, in
chinese
a native or inhabitant of Communist China or of Nationalist China
Chinese
food
they use some items which is a slow
poision
any substance that causes injury or illness or death of a living organism
poison
passion
for
health
.
Secondly
, the cost of fast
food
is
cheep
relatively low in price or charging low prices
cheap
as compared to staple or organic
food
, because
this
cost
less they
Accept comma addition
less, they
prefer to have fast
food
an the time taken to make them is
minimmal
the least possible
minimal
.
Although
, it has many
issue
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issues
like people suffer from stomach infections and other life
treathning
interact in a certain way
treating
diseases. By
inposing
Suggestion
in posing
extra taxes on
such
items
Accept comma addition
items, then
then
people will eat less and
governemnt
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
can
dreastically
in a drastic manner
drastically
redusce
cut down on; make a reduction in
reduce
people
form
a giver or sender
from
using it.
This
is only the best way authorities can provide
solution
Suggestion
a solution
the solution
to
this
massive issue.
As a result
of
this
low earning people who is more depended on it will stop using it. To conclude, it is the responsibility of government to provide
awarness
having knowledge of
awareness
related to problems associated with fast
food
. I agree that with
plethora
Suggestion
the plethora
a plethora
of tax on fast
food
which will benefit
human being
Suggestion
human beings
the human being
from destroying their
health
.
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