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Both poor and rich find the accessibility into university difficult.Do you agree or disagree?

#accessibility #university
It goes without saying that
,
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,
gaining
education
fundamentle
serving as an essential component
fundamental
 right of each and every student and their career base on
quailty
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the quality
quality
 of
education
 they received.
However
,
somepeople
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some people
 feel that gain higher level
education
 is difficult for wealthy people and poor people as well
.
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.
I agree with the given statement. There are two main
reasions
a rational motive for a belief or action
reasons
regions
reactions
.
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.
Why I go with the given statement.The
first
 point
thats
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that's
 come to my mind is that nowadays,
competiton
a business relation in which two parties compete to gain customers
competition
 increased due to
golbalisition
growth to a global or worldwide scale
globalisation
globalization
 and
unversities
the body of faculty and students at a university
universities
 give
admission
 to intelligent
studens
a learner who is enrolled in an educational institution
students
,
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,
those who are capable to understand the values of study and
also
benefical
promoting or enhancing well-being
beneficial
 for university, so that it is difficult to
enroll
register formally as a participant or member
enrol
 with low grade for both poor and rich people.
Second
,
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,
in developing
countries it
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countries, it
 is hard for middle class people to gain higher
education
 and
kowledge
the psychological result of perception and learning and reasoning
knowledge
 since
,
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,
they have not
eoungh
as much as necessary
enough
 money to pay
univarsities
the body of faculty and students at a university
university
universities
 fees.
Thus
,
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,
they decided to gain
education
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an education
 from local colleges and some of them start to do
job
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the job
a job
 and save money for their studies. Others,
however
, may feel that in
this
modren
belonging to the modern era; since the Middle Ages
modern
era it
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era, it
 might be easily accessed entrance in tertiary
education
 for students because there are many rich people who may be
taken
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taking
admission
 in the institute by giving donations
,
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,
there parents might be given funds and rich may have
patnership
the members of a business venture created by contract
partnerships
partnership
 with higher private
education
 centre
,
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,
so gates of these
education
 centres may be opened for
admission
 for rich children.Some people
also
 believe that universities may
provid
give something useful or necessary to
provide
schrolarships
financial aid provided to a student on the basis of academic merit
scholarships
 to
brillent
of surpassing excellence
brilliant
 students and many
eduction
the activities of educating or instructing; activities that impart knowledge or skill
education
centre
Suggestion
centres
 give discount to
low
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lower
 class students.
Therefore
,
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,
it may be easy or
common
Suggestion
commonly
 people to take
entrance
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an entrance
 in higher level
education
.
Inconclutio
n,
although
even though, in spite of the fact that
although
t rich people may get accessibility in
gradutio
the successful completion of a program of study
graduation
n with the help of money,
unversitite
the body of faculty and students at a university
universities
s should decide to give
admission
 to poor or rich students on the basis of their grade and
also
 on the academic performance

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