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The dangers and complexities of modern world have made mobile phone an absolute neccessity forchildren. To what extent to you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, almost everyone possesses a mobile phone. It is becoming an important tool for the safety of children, especially with the new smart phones, but it
also
 involves some drawbacks.
Firstly
, with the new smart phone parents can keep an eye on their children. They can know where they are without calling them as all these phones have built in global positioning system (
gps
Suggestion
GPs
gps'
gp's
) localisation.
This
 will
help to reduce school
Suggestion
help reduce school
 truancy.
Although
 the application can be disabled, it will give an indication of where that person is, even if the system is off.
Secondly
, with the increasing numbers of crimes
such
 as rape and kidnapping in modern times, it is good for children to have a mobile phone. If ever they are in
such
 a situation, they can transfer the news by means of text messaging or
authorities
Suggestion
the authorities
 can locate the place.
However
, there are some disadvantages. Children are not concentrating on their studies or listening to teachers as they are texting their boyfriend or girlfriend. They are
even not doing the
Suggestion
not even doing the
 homework they have been given.
As a result
, there is an increase in the number of failures at school.
This
 is not good for children or their future as they need good marks for university or a good job.
Although
 mobile phones
haves
Suggestion
have
had
have had
were having
are having
 some constraints, I believe it is very important for children to have one as long as they are not misused.
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