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Both the poor and the rich find the accessibility into university difficult. Do you agree or disagree?

#accessibility #university
In the modern world,
university
education
 is essential for every individual to achieve life goals and dreams.
However
, for poor people
enroll
register formally as a participant or member
enrolled
 with the
university
 is no longer an easy task due to
extream
of the greatest possible degree or extent or intensity
extreme
 competition among modern students. But I believe
money
 can buy an
education
, so I will not fully agree with
this
 statement.
Firstly
, many universities around the
world proved quality
Suggestion
world to provide quality
world provide quality
education
.
Therefore many
Accept comma addition
Therefore, many
 students travel to complete their studies finding their desired campus. In another word, student those who have
money
 able to do their studies without hesitation while
poor struggle
Suggestion
the poor struggle
 with their financial issues. Lack of resources is another issue some individuals facing a
low
Suggestion
lower
 lifestyle.
For example
, a typical student's needs are higher than ordinary people who need equipment like study materials, laptops, books, food, and accommodation.
Secondly
, In the modern world, there are many private universities, which provide
education
 for
money
Suggestion
the money
. Even the teenager who not at
university
-level, with
money
 they can
enroll
register formally as a participant or member
enrol
 with the campus.
but
Suggestion
But
 some poor student
unbales
 to complete their college studies properly miss
university
education
. An example, without a quality lifestyle some children will not able to complete their primary
education
 even they are extremely intelligent. And those who have to join the workforce early due to family issues,
consequently
, they miss their
education
.
Finaly
Suggestion
Finally
, I argue that with grate financial background opens a party to
university
 even any condition. But students who suffering from poorly hard to access any kind of campus due to the seriousness of
problems
Suggestion
the problems
.
However
, it is known many leaders and famous characters has come form low-level background.
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