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Some people think controls should be made for the media such as newspaper to publish other people’s private lives, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Opinions are divided on whether restrictions should be imposed on
press
Suggestion
the press
 like news article and magazine to publicize people’s confidential matter regarding their lives. From my point of view, it is necessary to disclose some people’s personal lives. Some contend that exposing the private information of
important members
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the important members
 in the society
such
 as
government
 officials can allow citizens to monitor their
behaviors
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
.
To begin
 with, citizens should have the right to know the personal lives of
government
 officials in order preventing situations like corruption.
For example
, some
press
 release will report the
government
 members’ news about their connections with big franchised companies.It is because
this
 can deter
government
 members from taking advantage of their positions to make illegal bargains with large corporations,
such
 as establishing policies that are
favorable
encouraging or approving or pleasing
favourable
 to companies in exchange for monetary returns. By doing so,
press
Suggestion
the press
 can act as a
third
-authority that restrain inappropriate
behaviors
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
 among
government
 officials so as to maintain the equality within a community.
However
, opponents think that
media
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the media
 are abusing their rights and report individual issues of many celebrities including their relationships. The reason
of
Suggestion
for
 reporting them is because they can help increase the hit rate of the newspaper and the magazines by attracting audience’s attention through giving
inhabitants
Suggestion
the inhabitants
 a channel to know something they should not have known.
As a result
, opponents agree that restrictions on the content of news should be imposed in order stopping
press
Suggestion
the press
 to reveal celebrities’ own lives,
which though
Accept comma addition
which, though
 they are public figures, they deserve the rights to have their own privacy or else it would violate human rights. In my opinion, though protecting the rights of public figures is of great importance, citizens should
also
 have the right to know something that will have a great impact on them, so it is important for media company to establish suitable self-regulations.

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