Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed rather than to work for a company or organization. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages to being self-employed? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

In the current era,
self-employment
is becoming increasingly popular. Due to the flexible options it offers,
therefore
many people prefer it to being an employee.
This
essay will
first
, discuss why
this
is
at
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on
the increase and
then
, address the drawbacks associated with working for oneself. There are many factors that are responsible for the popularity of
entrepreneurship
.
Firstly
,
lack
of
job
contributes in no small measure why some people prefer to be self-employed. The world economy in general and Nigeria’s
in particular
are titling to recession, so
this
gives rise to
high unemployment rate
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the high unemployment rate
. A lot of young
graduate
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graduates
would embrace
self-employment
in order to put food on their table than waste years seeking for the unavailable jobs in the labour market.
For instance
, my younger brother graduated from the university three years ago and sought for jobs in these years to no avail, whereas his classmate was already earning a living as an Entrepreneur. He never secured
this
job
until my family raised
fund
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funds
for his to start-up a
business
.
Furthermore
,
entrepreneurship
guarantees
independence
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the independence
and flexible
work
schedules. Entrepreneurs see employees that
work
from 8:00am to 5:00am as boring, monotonous and risky because of
lack
of
job
security. One that works for oneself has flexible
work
schedules and can operate from anywhere because he is his own boss. More so, with the advances in technology
such
as the Internet, an Entrepreneur does not need to have an office to make
money
, provided that he has the required tools to
work
from home.
For example
, I started as a Freelancer by writing Thesis, seminar and journal papers to people across the world through the website known as
freelancer
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freelancers
.
com
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Com
.
However
, there are many detriments of
entrepreneurship
such
as financial risk and
lack
of skills.
Although
, those that are self-employed enjoy all the rewards and benefits as well
as the
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as, the
associated risks, unlike an employee where the company bears the risks and rewards. To illustrate an example, I loaned a friend
money
to set-up a
business
, which he did and the
business
was doing fine until the uncertainty of the market crashed it. He lost the
money
I loaned to him and
also
his
business
because he had no capital to continue to fund it. He went back to be unemployed for about two years before he secured a paid
job
.
In addition
,
lack
of skills is a major drawback for
self-employment
. Many people are self-employed without the required
skillset
needed to keep them in the market to experience continued growth.
This
, often leads to the shutdown of the
firm
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form
prematurely.
For instance
, without the knowledge of Information Technology, I invested all my savings in the hope of founding a Tech company. I ultimately lost my
money
as well as the company. In summary, some people embrace
self-employment
due to
high unemployment rate
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the high unemployment rate
,
however without
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however, without
considering the pros and cons of it
such
as
financial burden
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a financial burden
financial burdens
and inadequate
skillset
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skill set
. For one to choose to be self-employed the downside of
entrepreneurship
must be
analyzed
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analysed
.
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