It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environment, such as the South Pole. What are advantages and disadvantages of this development?

With the advancement in technology, it makes easy for the people
to explore
Suggestion
explore
exploring
the world, even in that
are
a particular geographical region of indefinite boundary (usually serving some special purpose or distinguished by its people or culture or geography)
area
which has very extreme
whethers
the atmospheric conditions that comprise the state of the atmosphere in terms of temperature and wind and clouds and precipitation
weathers
whether s
weather
. So it is possible for the researchers and the traveller to travel to
remote natural environment
Suggestion
a remote natural environment
like the South Pole.
Well
Accept comma addition
Well, this
this
practise has its own pros and cons. I personally agree that
aformentioned
being the one previously mentioned or spoken of
aforementioned
statement has more merit over the demerit.
This
essay will cast the light in details with examples. On the one hand, commute to the extreme regions is in fashion nowadays, but it has its
disavantage
the quality of having an inferior or less favorable position
disadvantage
.
First
, if a person
want
Suggestion
wants
to commute to the remote place,
than
subsequently or soon afterward (often used as sentence connectors)
then
there should be need of special training related to how to protect
themsleves
reflexive form of "them"
themselves
from the dangers like attack of wild animals along with how to survive without some essential
ementies
things that make you comfortable and at ease
amenities
.
Secondly
, these kind of trips have
expensive
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expended
, only the people with lucrative income can afford to explore the place.
In addition
, research carried out by the expert might be
disturb
Suggestion
disturbing
the
wild
all living things (except people) that are undomesticated
wildlife
life
and their natural habitat.
Therefore
, exploring
such
type of regions are more expensive and interfere with the natural habitat of the animals.
On the other hand
, visit to
area
Suggestion
an area
the area
areas
which had
embide
spread or diffuse through
imbued
embedded
with
natural environment
Suggestion
the natural environment
, offer various
merit
Suggestion
merits
.
First
Suggestion
The first
and the foremost is that it
attract
Suggestion
attracts
the
atrraction
the force by which one object attracts another
attraction
of the people who loved the nature's creation.
Therefore
, it offers a person to
experince
the accumulation of knowledge or skill that results from direct participation in events or activities
experience
the new world and collect the memories.
Moreover
the research over
these
denotes a person or thing
this
area help the scientist to get a
knowlegde
the psychological result of perception and learning and reasoning
knowledge
about the
wild
all living things (except people) that are undomesticated
wildlife
life
and their living conditions.
Therefore
, it helps to preserve the species from the risk of extinction. To conclude, travelling to remote area is highly expensive and has
risk
Suggestion
the risk
a risk
to
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of
disturbance to
wild
Accept comma addition
wildlife, but
wildlife but
life
but it
also have
Suggestion
also has
various advantages as it
provide
Suggestion
provides
the chance to explore and experience the natural environment,
also
help the expert to know more about the
wild
all living things (except people) that are undomesticated
wildlife
life
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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