Some people think it's better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it's good to have friends who disagree with them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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You can choose your

friends but

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friends, but

you can’t choose your family is a very popular

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However

, should our choice of friends be based on how much we agree with

eachother

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each other

or should we

also

consider being friends with people with whom we don’t agree on everything?.

This

essay will discuss both these view points. Having shared opinions ensures that the

time

you spend with your friends is always enjoyable and

relateable

worthy of reliance or trust

reliable

. You would enjoy more if less

time

is spent on

aruguing

a contentious speech act; a dispute where there is strong disagreement

arguing

and you would

also

feel content. A recent study found that people now spend more

time

with their friends than their own families because they believe they can relate to their friends more as they have similar

interestes

a sense of concern with and curiosity about someone or something

interests

and point of views. If your

opions

a personal belief or judgment that is not founded on proof or certainty

opinions

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match you are less likely to

also

have social anxiety in social situations.

As a result

, you will avoid less social obligations because you aren’t fearful that what you say will be frowned upon.

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In fact

, you might look forward to gatherings.

On the other hand

, if your friends all have the exact same view points on everything as you, your view on things might be myopic. You will lack

perosnal

concerning or affecting a particular person or his or her private life and personality

personal

growth because you will never know what the other person with a

diferring

be different

differing

different

mindset means. In

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a component that is added to something to improve it

addition

, you are

also

more likely to make better decisions if

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of you or yourself

your

friends are different than you.

For example

, If an individual decides that they want to quit their job and follow their dream to travel the world, a friend having the same mindset will encourage

this

idea which might lead to a rash decision. A

friends

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friend

who has a different opinion would want to reason with

thier

of them or themselves

their

friend. In conclusion, It is important to have friends whose opinions match

ours so

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ours, so

that we have someone who understand us and spends

time

us.

However

, It is essential for our personal growth and making better life choices that we

also

have friends who disagree with us.

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shared values
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trust
emotional well-being
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societal norms
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