Some people think it's better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it's good to have friends who disagree with them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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, should our choice of friends be based on how much we agree with

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each other

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consider being friends with people with whom we don’t agree on everything?.

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essay will discuss both these view points. Having shared opinions ensures that the

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you spend with your friends is always enjoyable and

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worthy of reliance or trust

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feel content. A recent study found that people now spend more

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with their friends than their own families because they believe they can relate to their friends more as they have similar

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a sense of concern with and curiosity about someone or something

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have social anxiety in social situations.

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, you will avoid less social obligations because you aren’t fearful that what you say will be frowned upon.

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, you might look forward to gatherings.

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, if your friends all have the exact same view points on everything as you, your view on things might be myopic. You will lack

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more likely to make better decisions if

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, If an individual decides that they want to quit their job and follow their dream to travel the world, a friend having the same mindset will encourage

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idea which might lead to a rash decision. A

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ours, so

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us.

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, It is essential for our personal growth and making better life choices that we

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have friends who disagree with us.

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Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

4.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

329 words

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bond
support
unconditional love
shared values
mutual understanding
trust
emotional well-being
interdependence
societal norms
companionship
loyalty
advice
experiences
mentorship
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reliable
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Some people think it's better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it's good to have friends who disagree with them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Fully explain your ideas

Many people believe that the high levels of violence in films today are causing serious social problems. What are these problems and how they be reduced.

Write essay task 1 for the process of making carbonated drink

In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

You arranged to visit a friend in England but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: explain the important event; apologise for the situation; suggest a new arrangement.