Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test the safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are in favor of them because of their benefits to humanity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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It is true that scientific researchers use animal testing at large extent in order to develop any new drug. While these researchers d
oes
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do
harm to animals, I believe that any new scientific invention is not possible without these experiments and even beneficial for mankind. There are many reasons why experiments on animals in order to invent n
ew medicine
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new medicines
a new medicine
are unfair. Since human being developed, mankind always caused harm to other living beings.
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, new enrolled nurses and doctors do practice for operations in l
aboratory.
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the laboratory
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; mice i
s known
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are known
to be most f
avorite
something regarded with special favor or liking
favourite
a
nimal
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animals
in regard to experiments in medical labs. At the same time, these experiments affect the health of mice or other used animals and in some cases they suffer death.
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, testing can be proven to be dangerous and unjustifiable for animals as they don’t get any benefit.
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, In my v
iewpoint there
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viewpoint, there
are more advantages of t
esing
the act of subjecting to experimental test in order to determine how well something works
testing
on the animals rather than disadvantages. Scientists do not have any other dependable source to complete the testing or research that means they require the living being in order to perform scientific practices to check the side effects on h
uman body
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the human body
of s
pecific drug.
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a specific drug
The people who are against the arguments of benefit of research would have d
ifferent opinion
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a different opinion
different opinions
if their family member would have s
uffer
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suffered
with incurable disease
such
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as cancer and recovered with the help of invented medication.
Therefore
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, developed drug could save someone special l
ife even
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life, even
if it was developed from p
ain
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the pain
suffered by o
ther
any of various alternatives; some other
another
living being. In conclusion,
although
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drugs caused pain to the insects and o
raganisms,
a living thing that has (or can develop) the ability to act or function independently
organisms
human achieved better results In medical occupation with the help of these r
eseaches
systematic investigation to establish facts
researches
researchers
we found solutions to fight various dangerous diseases all over the world.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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