Some people believe that protecting the environment os the government responsibility. Others believe that every individual should take responsibility for it discuss both views and give your opinion

Few individuals think that
environment
should be protected by the
government
;
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;
However
, many feel that responsibility should be taken by every person
.
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.
This
essay will
highlights
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highlight
both the opinions and
also
elaborate how
administration
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the administration
and people play an equal role in maintaining the
environment
. In order to save the
environment some
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environment, some
steps should be taken by
government
.
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.
They should apply rules and regulations and take strict
action s
something done (usually as opposed to something said)
actions
against lawbreakers.
For instance
, smoking
cigratte
finely ground tobacco wrapped in paper; for smoking
cigarette
cigarettes
at public places should be banned as it causes noise pollution,
moreover
, factories should be moved to countryside because it creates
lot
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lots
of waste material and destroy
cities atmosphere
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the city's atmosphere
city's atmosphere
city atmosphere
due to which people who live in cities have
suffer
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suffered
from many
isses
prepare and issue for public distribution or sale
issues
. With regard to
environment
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the environment
, every person should be
awared
(sometimes followed by 'of') having or showing knowledge or understanding or realization or perception
aware
and should give their contribution as a part of the nation.
Firstly
, They should keep their
environment
neat and clean and avoid spreading waste on the public places.
Secondly
, they should follow the law which
was imposed
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a contribution
by
government
For examplification, few years ago, administration officials launched one law like service your vehicles at time to time because pollution of vehicles causes detrimental effects on the
environment
In a nutshell, while
government
should give contribution in term to save
environment
, public is
also
equally responsible for it

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Environmental stewardship
  • Sustainability
  • Regulations
  • Eco-friendly
  • Carbon footprint
  • Grassroots movements
  • Public policies
  • Renewable resources
  • Conservation efforts
  • Sustainable practices
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