Some people believe that women should play an equal role as men in a country’s police force or military force, such as the army, while others think women are not suitable for these kinds of jobs. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is commonly believed that the women play a paramount role in controlling of crime or defending against enemies in each country.

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view is favoured by some, others have a strong counter argument that women cannot become prosperous militants or members of the

police

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force.

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my perspective, women play a crucial role in these sectors.

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essay will delve into both these aspects in support of my view. On the one hand, some believe that females must not be given equal opportunity to work in the

police

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force or army. One reason behind it is that women have less physical abilities than men. Having

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a general term for female steroid sex hormones that are secreted by the ovary and responsible for typical female sexual characteristics

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hormones, they usually are less capable of achieving their goals in these kinds of jobs.

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, to jump from a two-storey building, men are more powerful than women physically, and to arrest criminals, they are not as successful as men.

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, emotionally they are less fitted than the male ones to participate in missions.

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many occasions, they might be sent to battlefields to fight against drug dealers, smugglers, or even escaped prisoners, but they might not tolerate difficult situations, like facing severely injured people or horrible

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accident

scenes.

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, men have better potentials not only physically, but mentally to work as a militant or

policeman

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a policeman

policemen

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, I personally think that both genders must equally be given the same opportunity to have these kinds of jobs. One factor behind it is that have been better critical thinkers. Obviously, they have shown their roles to defend their country during the war. As a prime example, British women officers were extremely prosperous to expose the Germans` schemes in World War II.

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Were they not allowed

to participate in the army plans, Europe would not have defeated Germany.

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, to control crime, women must be hired in

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police force

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the police force

. Clearly, their roles are really important in those societies that males are restricted to touch females.

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, in Iran, as a prime discipline, policemen are not permitted to touch the female offenders due to Islamic prohibitions;

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, the government has given the green line to women to have equal opportunity to work in

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kind of job. In conclusion, while some may agree that females cannot become a perfect officer or army personnel, I completely disagree with them. From my point of view, because of some religious restrictions and specific abilities they have, governments must give a similar fortune to women working as a militant or

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police officer

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a police officer

police officers

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