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Some people believe that children should be given lessons on how to manage money in the school. do you agree or disagree?

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To teach your children about the
useage
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use
usage
 of money is the hobby of
wisely
Suggestion
wise
 persons.
Money is something in
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Money is something
 which everyone has to deal in future.If you are aware of the use of
currency
Accept comma addition
currency, then
then
 you are the best person.Because with banknote you can make your life stylish. It seems that people who have no idea that how bankroll should be spent, usually they face big troubles in their daily life.But
some how
in some unspecified way or manner; or by some unspecified means
somehow
 if
same children
Suggestion
the same children
 successful to get the trick of
useage
the act of using
usage
 of
currencynote
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currency note, then
currency note then
then
 it falls in their positivity.As we see in most of
developed countries
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the developing countries
developing countries
 that
parrents
a father or mother; one who begets or one who gives birth to or nurtures and raises a child; a relative who plays the role of guardian
parents
 start trying to teach them how to use their pocket-money and they get the expecting
result
Suggestion
results
 from their beloved ones. While in developing countries majority
are doing
Suggestion
is doing
 its vice versa.They are not in favour of giving lessons to their siblings on the right of spending of coinage.So,
there
Suggestion
they're
 observed a big difference between both of them. Like all those people who fully support to educate school learners about the management of money
,
Accept space
,
I
am
Suggestion
also agree
am also agreeing
have also agreed
also
 agree with them.Through doing
this
their
in or at that place
there
 must be a vice versa result from present and more money users will
born
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bear
 in
next
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the next
 four or five decades.Without doing
this
 we are
demeging
(sometimes followed by 'to') causing harm or injury
damaging
 our society in term of financial enhancer and it would lasts bad impact.
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