Some people believe that children should be given lessons on how to manage money in the school. do you agree or disagree?

To teach your children about the
useage
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use
usage
of money is the hobby of
wisely
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wise
persons.
Money is something in
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Money is something
which everyone has to deal in future.If you are aware of the use of
currency
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currency, then
then
you are the best person.Because with banknote you can make your life stylish. It seems that people who have no idea that how bankroll should be spent, usually they face big troubles in their daily life.But
some how
in some unspecified way or manner; or by some unspecified means
somehow
if
same children
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the same children
successful to get the trick of
useage
the act of using
usage
of
currencynote
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currency note, then
currency note then
then
it falls in their positivity.As we see in most of
developed countries
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the developing countries
developing countries
that
parrents
a father or mother; one who begets or one who gives birth to or nurtures and raises a child; a relative who plays the role of guardian
parents
start trying to teach them how to use their pocket-money and they get the expecting
result
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results
from their beloved ones. While in developing countries majority
are doing
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is doing
its vice versa.They are not in favour of giving lessons to their siblings on the right of spending of coinage.So,
there
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they're
observed a big difference between both of them. Like all those people who fully support to educate school learners about the management of money
,
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,
I
am
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also agree
am also agreeing
have also agreed
also
agree with them.Through doing
this
their
in or at that place
there
must be a vice versa result from present and more money users will
born
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bear
in
next
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the next
four or five decades.Without doing
this
we are
demeging
(sometimes followed by 'to') causing harm or injury
damaging
our society in term of financial enhancer and it would lasts bad impact.
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