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Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with?

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Advertisement is a significant tool and one among the finest marketing factors during promoting a
product
. It creates a centre of attraction to a buyer and a clear picture about the
product
.
Such
 method helps to cut-down the time consumption to explain orally to the buyers. While introducing or launching a new
product
 to the existing
market
, advertising is a shortcut way to reach all the level of buyers. It not only lend a hand on
local
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the local market, but
the local market but
market
 but
also
on
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for
 gathering buyers in
global
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global markets
the global market
market
;
such
 as multi-national companies, overseas branches etc.
Thus
, the
product
 can introduce to
entire world
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the entire world
 in less than a minute.
On the other hand
, From the
buyers
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buyer's
 perspective, advertising creates an illusion about the merits of the products and no way to trace the disadvantages of them other than use them once or hear from users.
However
, with
lack
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the lack
 of knowledge of the
product
 specification, it could be a risk or waste of money
of
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by
on
 purchasing them by only seeing the advertisement. Because, some expensive products cannot be refundable. As a matter of fact, the advertisers are more focus on capturing the
market
 from competitors,
therefore
 they would add false comparisons while advertising.
This
could leads
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could lead
 the buyers to take a wrong decision.
Thus
, I agree that the advertising encourages to buy products, but
that
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that's
 to be in a better way than
brain-washing
forcible indoctrination into a new set of attitudes and beliefs
brainwashing
 the buyers with false information.
Also
, it is the buyers' choice to go for the call.
Ofcourse
Suggestion
Of course
 the new
product
 may change our lives better but not at in all the circumstances. So we must focus on what to believe and choose the
product
.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • encourage
  • persuade
  • manipulative
  • unnecessary
  • excessive
  • artificial needs
  • desires
  • consumers
  • oversaturation
  • impulse buying
  • financial problems
  • inform
  • educate
  • features
  • benefits
  • innovations
  • raise awareness
  • social issues
  • positive behavior
  • enrich
  • well-being
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