Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with?

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Advertisement is a significant tool and one among the finest marketing factors during promoting a

product

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. It creates a centre of attraction to a buyer and a clear picture about the

product

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method helps to cut-down the time consumption to explain orally to the buyers. While introducing or launching a new

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to the existing

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, advertising is a shortcut way to reach all the level of buyers. It not only lend a hand on

local

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the local market, but

the local market but

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but

also

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for

gathering buyers in

global

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global markets

the global market

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;

such

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as multi-national companies, overseas branches etc.

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, the

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can introduce to

entire world

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the entire world

in less than a minute.

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, From the

buyers

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buyer's

perspective, advertising creates an illusion about the merits of the products and no way to trace the disadvantages of them other than use them once or hear from users.

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, with

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the lack

of knowledge of the

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specification, it could be a risk or waste of money

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purchasing them by only seeing the advertisement. Because, some expensive products cannot be refundable. As a matter of fact, the advertisers are more focus on capturing the

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from competitors,

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they would add false comparisons while advertising.

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could leads

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could lead

the buyers to take a wrong decision.

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, I agree that the advertising encourages to buy products, but

that

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that's

to be in a better way than

brain-washing

forcible indoctrination into a new set of attitudes and beliefs

brainwashing

the buyers with false information.

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, it is the buyers' choice to go for the call.

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Of course

the new

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may change our lives better but not at in all the circumstances. So we must focus on what to believe and choose the

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

273 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

encourage
persuade
manipulative
unnecessary
excessive
artificial needs
desires
consumers
oversaturation
impulse buying
financial problems
inform
educate
features
benefits
innovations
raise awareness
social issues
positive behavior
enrich
well-being

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Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with?

Fully explain your ideas

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With all the troubles in the world today, money spent on space exploration is a complete waste. The money could be better spent on other things. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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