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You recently attended a conference and you would like to give a presentation about the information you gained by attending the conference. describe what type of presentation you have in mind what topics it would cover and how long it would take who should participate in the presentation and where should it be conducted

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I am writing
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 letter requesting your permission for a
presentation
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 that I am having in mind based on recently gained knowledge from the conference that I attended. Let me explain
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a bit
 more on the
presentation
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.
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 will be a power-point
presentation
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 which I could share with you for approval before presenting it to the wider audience. I will be going over all the slides explaining the important talking points and answering questions. The session would cover topics on the architecture of the new database
system
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, The advantage of the
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 compared to the other similar
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 available in the market and
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 the various types and means of support available with the new
system
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. Overall, the
presentation
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 would take 2 hours. I recommend
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 session for the new joiners and junior employees as
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 would give them
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an
 expert introduction to the new
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 and
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 hand information on the new features.I am planning to use our conference room on the
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 floor for the event. Thank you for your consideration.

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