Some people think its better to choose friends who always have the same opinion as them. Other people believe its good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

#people #friends

People have contrasting views about the criteria for the selection of friends. Some people argue that you should have friendship with like minded people

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every issue, while

other

plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned

others

think that friends can have

different

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a different view point

different view points

view

point than

your

second person pronoun; the person addressed

you

seldomly

. In my

opinion

, both having similar mindset friends or

vise

a holding device attached to a workbench; has two jaws to hold workpiece firmly in place

vice

versa have their merits and demerits

however

friends should be selected based on personal character. Having similar views as your friends

avoid

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avoids

the conflicts and increase the interest in similar activities.

For instance

, a study

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London School of Economics concluded that friends who have similar

view points

a mental position from which things are viewed

viewpoints

can do

succesful

having succeeded or being marked by a favorable outcome

successful

successfully

business without any conflict and having similar mindset help to invest more in mutual business. John Michel, who is

well known psychiatrist

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a well known psychiatrist

, said that having friendship with like minded people reduce the

anxity

(psychiatry) a relatively permanent state of worry and nervousness occurring in a variety of mental disorders, usually accompanied by compulsive behavior or attacks of panic

anxiety

and boost your self confidence. A recent study concluded that

although

sharing the similar thinking with your friends

reduce

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reduces

stress, make feel proud and

decreas

decrease in size, extent, or range

decrease

decreases

decreased

the chances of

conflit

an open clash between two opposing groups (or individuals)

conflict

, it

also increase

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also increases

the narrow mind thinking. Friends with

opposite

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an opposite opinion

opinion

help you to see the

otherside

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other side

picture

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the picture

For example

, if all your friend circle is consist of smoker

then

no one will warn you about

consequences

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the consequences

smoking

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smoking, however

however

having

friend

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friends

with non-smoking point of

view

will discourage you. Though, having same thinking or not have

some

one or some or every or all without specification

any

advantage or disadvantages, but if these

view

point

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points

are not honestly shared

then

have no values.

Therefore

, we should have friends who are honest, loyal and care taking. In conclusion, having friends with similar

opinion

can help you feel

comfertable

providing or experiencing physical well-being or relief

comfortable

and avoid conflict.

On the other hand

, friends with opposite

opinion

will increase your thinking

horizan

the line at which the sky and Earth appear to meet

horizons

. But in both situation you require friends having honesty, loyalty and

careness

Suggestion

care

cares

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