Some people think young people should be free to choose his or her job, but other people think they should be realistic and think more about their future. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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seeking is always an arduous problem that a fresh graduate has to deal with when they enter the

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market for the first time. Some

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believe that teenagers should have

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full freedom to choose their occupations,

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others contend that youngsters should think in a more practical way by considering the

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prospect

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of the

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. On the one hand, if young

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can choose a

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of their own free will, they will have more passion and motivation towards the

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. They will devote more of themselves

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, because it is something they love, assuming they choose an occupation that

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their own interest.

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,

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can allow them to perform well in the workplace as their passion would act as a

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force to push them

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, thinking about how to excel in their occupation.

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, those performing well in the workplace are always regarded as having better interpersonal

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. It is because they have more confidence to communicate with their colleagues, given that they are doing well in the

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.

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, if a youngster is forced to choose an occupation he

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not like, he will just perform the daily routine of the

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without thinking about how to improve his performance. It turns out that he would be frustrated and failed to be a high-flyer in the company.

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, opponents think that fresh graduates should pick their

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in a more realistic way of evaluating the

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path and the salary that a

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can offer them.

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, a graduate who is good at biology

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now

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two choices which are becoming a biology teacher or an animal researcher. If he thinks in a practical way, he will choose

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teacher, which can guarantee him a promising

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path and a decent salary.

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, he will not choose

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because is it difficult to get a promotion in the research field since there is no clear promotion standard. The example proved that it is always necessary to think realistically when

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have to earn a living.

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, it is normal that

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have to earn enough fortune before they pursue their

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. From my point of view, the conclusion is young

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should consider more the solid

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before they acquire a

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or else they

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regret

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what they did

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the low salary or poor

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. Pursuing own interest is normal, but it is necessary to have enough savings first.