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The given bar chart illustrates that people aged 65 and 65 plus over the 100 year period (from 1940 to 2040) in Japan, Sweden and the USA. Overall, it has shown that the US country highest population of age 65 and over, whereas Japan country population fewer of age 65 and more than 65.

First

of all, the USA and Japan were counted nearly 10% and 5% of older people aged between 65 to over 65 in 1940, while Japan did not change below 5

percent

till 1980.

However

, the US gradually rose almost 5

percent

in 1980 and it will be remaining till 2020.

In addition

, Japan would be crossing over 2020 below 20% towards the USA and above 20

percent

of Sweden.

Hence

, It significantly the growth of population by age 65 and over 65 approximately 27% in 2040. In comparing to Sweden only 7% in the starting year and it increased below 15

percent

and crossing the USA in 2000.

, it gradualy picked almost 20

percent

in 2020, but it drametically growth almost 25%

Submitted by anitanaika19 on Fri Oct 04 2019

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Include an introduction and conclusion

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Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

3 paragraphs

178 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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gender diversity
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educational experience
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merit and potential
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natural differences
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balanced workforce
traditionally male-dominated or female-dominated fields
fluctuating applicant numbers
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