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With internet improvements, people can share views or opinions on certain goods or services that they have purchased. Is this a good or a bad thing? Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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In
this
 contemporary era,
internet
 plays the most crucial role in the individual's life
,
Accept space
,
with the aid of the
internet
,
Accept space
,
we can do all kinds of works in microseconds. Sharing our views or opinions on certain goods consists of some good as well as bad impact on the individual. I will discuss both the points and
also
 put my opinion in following paragraphs.
To begin
 with, telling our opinion on the
internet
 has too many benefits.
First
 and foremost, with the help of
reviews
Suggestion
the reviews
,
an
Suggestion
a
 human are more aware toward the products. To give an instance, if a human beings buy thing on online website
such
 as Amazon,
flipkart
 and google, they can suggest their view on comments box which helps the best buyer to know about the quality of that product.
Secondly
, it
also
 saves man time as well as money. To justify, with the assists of anthropoid views
an
Suggestion
a
 person is in a position to find the place in lower cost which is mentioned by the public. Every coin has two sides.
Therefore
, some people
is misused
Suggestion
are misusing
are misused
 the
internet
. They put wrong belief on
internet
Suggestion
the internet
 due to that, sometimes customer select wrong product threw some websites and they faced various kinds of problems in future.
Last
 but
not least, few
Suggestion
not least, a few
 products are
fake buy
Accept comma addition
fake, but
fake but
 they sell their product as high cost. In conclusion,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 would like to reiterate that reviews and ratings are widely accepted by customers.
Although
 there are some instances where an unauthorized feedback system can be misleading, the overall review system is very beneficial for the end-users.
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